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Karin, it was a long wait for this episode and I am sure that many people will be pleased to see part 21, some will also be sad too, the almost abrupt ending which was not telegraphed in prior chapters. I think, that like other writers I have read, there seems to be one flaw in George's creation as a character. From the beginning he was straight, then, over time, he shows that he is attracted to Alex. I would like to see a story where the straight character doesn't change but a resolution is found in a different way. As George does change and shows feelings for Alex, with that special night taking place 6 months later, it doesn't gel. This is only my POV and it interfered with my suspension of disbelief. I did enjoy the story however. Another comment is more on the choice of end points for each chapter, I think that you did an excellent job there, they kept the story alive,but not through suspense, but through an interest in what happened to the characters.Finally, I will take this opportunity to thank you for your time and commitment, I for one will look forward to the next and succeeding stories you write.m |
Healing Cousin George 21 Details |
REALLY liked the writing in the transformation scene. My only "let down" was when Frank lost his memory. Personally I like to see them remember who they were, otherwise what is the point. (that is only my opinion)Thanks for writing and posting a great addition to the SRU story line. |
Francesca Details |
Enjoyed the story thank you for sharing |
Master Voodoo part 2 Details |
Well for a first start, not too bad,but you need to break up your story intoappropriate paragraphs. AS you wrote now it is just a bunch of run togethersentences, hard to read, hard to follow.Try rewriting it so it can be better read/understood. |
Laying there content Details |
I agree with the other review. There are some great concepts for a story here, but they jump all over the place. The Spells R Us thing just came out of no where. I didn't know we were in that universe. At one point I thought we were in the future. I found it difficult to follow.The character "Robert/Roberta/Bobbie" seemed to willing to jump into the idea of being a woman and then working in a female role. I'm sorry but any male at college age (i.e. early 20's) is going to resist when presented with forced feminization. Even if he's a closeted crossdresser or transsexual. Most individuals at that age are not comfortable in their own sexuality to embrace something of this magnitude. However I liked the way the story started out. You set it up quite well and thats what grabbed my interest. A dominate female professor and a college student required to take a womans study course as part of his scholarship requirements. A simple idea. This is enough to base a larger story on, or even a universe of stories. i would have liked to know more about this group that gave the scholarship, why did they require that course? Who were they? What happened to the recipients of the scholarship after graduating? Remember the best stories are based on the K.I.S.S. method. Keep It Simple Sweetie. Cheryl H. |
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