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The story has the reader involved through advoidance of plot devices such as magic, witchcraft, fantasy or science fiction. I was able to inject myself into the mind and body of the hero(ine) and use my own imagination to add full color to the scenes and incidents described. This is what makes a great story for me.The only improvements I can suggest would be to address the feminization, both bodily and psychologically, brought about by the use of female hormone therapy. For example, did breast growth cause embarrassment that was followed by pride in their presentation? This would be an enhancement worth adding. |
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Thanks for a great story starting out.I have read and re-read the " Fun with Aunt Madge " by Anonymous Writer and the other with Pindick ; can't recall the title- it's about a young boy introduced to x-dressing by his Aunt over a period of a few days. It's sweet and sentimental and then there's the "Miss Victoria's School " over at Crystal's TG Site by Abby Rhodes- it's about a young boy attending a girl's school as a boy and gradually becomes a boy-girl-including a pair of small blooming breasts. Two quick comments: One, please check your spelling,as I noticed a few errors that slightly distracted from my reading enjoyment. Two, can you look into maybe collaborating with Joe Sixpack and add some SWI ( Stories With Images ). The writing is excellent and I hope you will continue, as I look forward to future episodes. I like stories with pictures to see to help illustrate what is happening ; just a personal preference of mine. Looking forward to more from you, FtygrlXXOO ;) |
Dressing with Auntie Heather Details |
I continue to be, supportive and encouraging to most writers. I know that people need encouragement when they are just starting out, and that there is a good way to offer criticism.My problem with Paul Jutras is I don't mind a writer getting lots of "play", but as a reader, I get annoyed when that writer's work doesn't get better over time, and that's particularly the case here. He seems to write only for himself, and seems not to listen AT ALL to suggestions offered to help him improve. It would be nice to see subsequent stories reflect some improvement, but so far, no dice. Its funny how on the one hand, people complain when they don't get feedback on their stories, and on the other hand, people complain when those of us who do offer feedback, offer rather straightforward criticism.Can't have it both ways, people, if you solicit feedback for stories, you have to have the guts to listen to *all* of it. More importantly, tho, you have to have the guts and maturity to see if MAYBE the people who are critiquing your work might actually have something constructive to say...and then incorporate it into your work. I, for one, will be happy when I can one day offer a glowing review of Paul's work. Right now, I only have a slim hope that maybe he is listening, really LISTENING, and will begin to show some improvement. - Paula |
Fairyland 2 Details |
Dana,Keep it going, it will be interesting to see what will happen in the coming chapters.M |
From Office Worker to Dominated Slut 4 Details |
enjoyed this story. the start of it reminded me of the stoy ANDREW which I also enjoyed. That's also a good think. I'm not picking on you if you got an idea from a story you read. Also being a huge anime fan myself I really like the DRAGON SLAVE blast used. |
Terrible Tragic Story Details |
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