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I thought that Candi, knowing all about hair and make up was a little trite. And worrying that Frank wouldn't want to go to bed with her was just silly, heck, she couldn't have forgotten how she felt when she was Jonathan! Other than that, the story was pretty good.ThanksMr. Ram |
T.G.I.F Details |
Ahhh, the FF7 Cloud crossdressing fiasco. It's become a classic video game history moment. It was definitely fetish fuel for my budding TG fascination as a child. The whole scenario begs for a TG story (I’ve drafted some stories on this myself in the past) and I’m glad to see someone finally did it!I loved the sense of teasing and humiliation you created all throughout, breaking down those “soldier defenses” and training (great characterization) up until Cloud’s submission at the end. It was very palpable and hot—from an ex-SOLDIER to a “sluttified dickgirl”. From the machine calling him “dickgirl”, to the unwanted stimulation and pleasure. Overall, the fantasy and the feelings of the fantasy were conveyed very well.One thing you could improve is your grammar. If English isn’t your first language, this can be forgiven, but the story is full of grammatical errors. “They started to tease tipof it” and Wires were removed from his body, making him to breath from relief” are just two sentences out of many I saw with bad grammar.Also, I saw a lot of simple, passive sentences (using “was” or “to be”). Try to write more active verbs. Instead of “At the endhis dick was small and limp”, try saying “At the end, his dick hung lifelessly, small and limp”.I look forward to seeing more from you!- Z |
Forced Feminization of Cloud Details |
Wherever you go with this story, I hope you do it soon! This was a VERY enjoyable read and only confirms my conviction that a TG fiction story CAN be written without overt and constant sex getting in the way. Certainly those things have their places and I do not denigrate them but, I much prefer this kind of story. Very nicely done, Starson. I can see a very bright future in this genre for you. cathy_t_ |
Adjustments Details |
Good workmanlike piece for its genre.Gaff = device used by carny or magician to work an illusion; by extension, device used toconceal a man's genitals for the illusion of womanhood. Gaffe = blunder. Or are the twospelled alike in e.g Britain? |
Candy's Story Details |
Not my favorite in the "twisted wishes genre", but a cute little vignette nevertheless. I rate this tale a B+. |
SRU: I Dream of Genie Details |
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