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I liked this story, though if I were to write one along these lines I would have probably kept the readers waiting for awhile longer before getting right into the "good stuff." Also, while I personally prefer sci-fi and/or magical TG fiction, this one was perhaps more original in a few ways than the typical stories I'm used to reading. For one, when the guy got to the pink room, I was totally unprepared for what happened. I thought it would be some sort of chemical injection scene followed by transformation, but it wasn't that at all. Not that it was dissapointing, but I actually like it when a writer can lead someone in one direction and then suddenly pull a surprise. It makes the story seem more real that way, almost as if the characters have a mind of their own, rather than dull, predictable characters. If I wrote this story, it would have went in another direction right after the guy got to the pink room. I would have probably used a teaser scene where the guy was observing something happening to someone else before it was his turn. Then again maybe that would be overkill. Anyway good story! Reading through the formatting wasn't a problem for me, by the way. It's the words that countthe most anyway. Keep up the good work. |
Forced Into Babyhood Details |
AngelI love your story. A lot of the story sort of parallels what had actually happened to me. I was very adrogynes in my younger years. Eccept I always wanted to be a girl and I always thought God had it in for me. Since then I have learned who I was and why and I am living more as a woman now than as a male and I am happy. I still have to d the male thing only because I love my family and do not want to lose them. I am a very presentable and passable woman in everyway including my voice. I used to have a very beautiful singing voice that was in the soprano range for females. I still have this range somewhat. Not as good when I was prepuberty of course but still quite passable. I am always taken for a woman when we go to resturants or I do shopping. I am flattered inside, but if my wife is with me she hates it when a waitress comes over and she goes "Are you Ladies ready to order?" Especially when I am in grundgy male clothes. My wife always goes "What do you want JOHN!" Which is there to inform the waitress I am not a woman. My wife is really upset at these things happening. Secretly I am thrilled but it does no good in a relationship. It really does cripple once self as what happens to Ricky and when you are trying to identify yourself as male because you get beat up otherwise, the mind does go into a termoil situation where you have a true identity crises. I had that happen to me. I went into a jewelry store looking for a watch battery while I was presenting as male. They thought I was a woman and addressed me as such. I slipped into female mode not to embarrass them and had to use a credit card and had to show my drivers license which was male of course. They where shocked at first and recovered. I walked out from the store and had a major anxiety attack and didn't know who or what I was, it scared the hell out of me. It was crippling. I just stood there for I do not know how long trying to figure it out. Ricky going inside of himselve is a very real situation that is very frightening no matter how you look at it. To be overjoyed in the way you want to be, but yet frightened because you should not be this way is terrifing in the worst possible way. You are a very astute writer and I am enjoying yur story very much. I am looking forward to it's continuation. It may be fiction, but it parallels real life. When you answer the phone and you get maam'ed it can be a thrill or it can be a terror.Keep up the good work dear, I hope you can make your writting a career that you can live by.HugsJoni |
A Life Ever Changing #26 Details |
Very nice. The first story I've read without skimmingin a while. I liked how the various men become ordinary, average, functional females, not babes orsilicone-type strippers under the spell. And the authoris dabbling in cultural change in his two stories,which appeals to me. Good job! |
The Kitchen Sink Details |
As I am writing this 3+ years after your posted the story, I will refrain from commenting on grammar and spelling. I enjoyed the first two stories, 'Mirror,Mirror' was very sweet in its own way, the boy got what he wanted, but it did cost him. "Through the Lookign Glass" was really aboout redemption. I am not into cruelty and/or humiliationi, so the last was not so good (for me) even if the jerk did deserve some justice. After all, two out of three isn't bad.JoAnn |
R. Kanes Nik-Naks: Reflection Trilogy Details |
As far as I know, I get all of your stories. I was surprised to see you didn't have a story for 5 days - took a vacation? This story is a good one - different too. |
Bridge Construction Details |
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